Please give a hearty welcome to women's fic and YA author, Jessica Brooks!
Jessica Brooks lives in sunny California with her husband, Lovemuffin, and their three daughters (plus three dogs, one snake, two fish, a cat, and a rabbit). She uses her love (aka addiction) of coffee to fuel her love (aka addiction) for all things writerly, and shares most of her addictive thoughts on her blog, My Thoughts Exactly. She is also on twitter and facebook.
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When Lydia asked if I'd like to guest post about a women's fiction topic, I was a bit wary at first. Sure I read women's fiction -- I even write it. But figuring out one specific thing to highlight? Ack! Luckily, one of my favorite things about women's fiction is the characters and their interaction with each other, so that's what I'm going to talk about today: Characters I'd like to see more of in women's fiction, and why.
1) An MC who knows how to say no.
Secondary character: "Could you do (insert whatever here) for me today?"
MC: "Yeah right. You're crazy in the head."
MCs don't have to be doormats. They can have conflict, decisions to make and internal issues that don't involve figuring out how to say no (or not being able to). What do you find more exiting, a character sitting around twiddling her thumbs about having to make yet another pie for the neighborhood picnic, or a character who just went off on her best friend for expecting her to pay for gas on a five minute trip? (Even better, make me think she's crazy-selfish, then fifty pages later, throw out some interesting reason as to why paying for gas was such a big deal.)
2) An MC who is on the heavy side, knows it, and works it to her full advantage.
Bigger women can have self-confidence too, ya know.
Say the MC is a little on the large side. Now say the reader finds this out in some simple, almost-easy-to-miss-if-they're-skimming-through-the-story, way. The reader now knows she isn't all skin and bones, so you can go straight to giving her a high dose of self-confidence. Show men dropping like flies as she passes by, jobs being thrown at her because she's good at what she does. Explain how she struts her stuff through a restaurant, knowing she's lookin' good. My point is, women and weight issues go hand in hand. That topic is old news. But a woman who's a little heavier, who enjoys eating her entire dinner while on a first date, who flaunts those bosoms because she can and knows what she wants and gets it -- that's the kind of character I want to learn more about.
3) MCs who are selfish. Who aren't very good at explaining how they feel. Who, by the end of the book, become caring, or good at something they were terrible at, in the end.
I loves me a transformation.
An MC doesn't have to be a flat-out jerk in the beginning of the book, or come across as someone who has their lips practically sewn shut and can't speak for themselves, to have a transformation. But why can't it be something a little like that, at least? A character who can't stand her father, for instance, and is overly hateful toward him -- but the further you read, the more you understand the reasons she acts that way. Then throw something out there, a situation that makes everything switch, a full three-sixty. Show me she's starting to care. It could be little hints at first, or a full-out personality switcheroo. Now when I close that book, I'm going to feel satisfied. I watched her grow. I went through the epiphany (whether it was hers, mine, or ours) with her. I'm proud of her growth. I call that a WIN.
4) Villains.
Villains are great. Give me mean, petty women, then show me how the MC kicks their butts. (This could be done literally, figuratively, or both.)
It's happened to all of us -- that one character who makes us cringe when they enter a scene. "Oh crud. What terrible thing is she/he going to say now?" or "Noooooo she's going to tell Billy's brother's ex-wife that Jennie is the one who hid the adoption papers! Run, Jennie! Run the other way!" Let's face it. All women have their witchy-side, but not all of them show it. Nothing makes me root for a character more than seeing them finally stand up for themselves and deal with that annoying villain (preferably totally and completely embarrassing said villain in the process).
And there you have it. Four character types I'd like to see more in women's fiction. What kind of characters would you like to see more?
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These are some really great insights, Jessica. Thanks so much for joining us today!
~Lydia

I don't read or write women's fiction (I'm YA all the way), but I'm going to mention this post to a friend of mine who does write it. :)
ReplyDeleteStina,
ReplyDeleteI could see a lot of these points being relevant for female-focused YA as well. In fact, I think that's why more than a few women's fic authors also write YA (myself included), and vice versa, because the two have a lot of similarities in their foundations.
I'd like to see more smart, sexy female characters who are over 40 and still relevant, and not just in an "isn't that cute" kind of way. Give me a grandma who can still curl grandpa's toes. ;)
ReplyDeleteGood point, Linda. :) I almost think the 40-50+ market could be a sub-category all its own, kind of like chick lit is for the 20-somethings.
ReplyDeleteTotally agree. And you know what, this says what I was just thinking over the weekend. I need another Jennifer Cruisie book. Because she does all this in one fell swoop when she's on her game and writing on her own.
ReplyDeleteMartina
I've got at least one of Jennifer Crusie's books in my "to read" pile. I heard she's awesome. :)
ReplyDeleteI have a soft spot for MCs you want to hate but really love. The kind that are self centered and seem a little shallow or the manipulative ones. Sometimes the world has been a little hard on them and they find ways to deal that aren't always lovable. Making them a likable heroine - now there is a challenge!
ReplyDeleteSierra,
ReplyDeleteI point to my classic example of Miranda Priestly in THE DEVIL WEARS PRADA. Seriously one of the best characters ever.
I've got all of these in current and upcoming WiPs. YAY!
ReplyDeleteGreat guest post:) Thanks!
Great post, and I agree with Linda on the over 40 but relevant female. There are so few of those in women's fiction.
ReplyDeleteIn the WIP I'm starting for Nano, the MC isn't exactly a doormat, but she kinda is. That's cliche, I know, but her situation isn't, I don't think.
Oh, and I like Jennifer Cruise. I just bought her newest!
Stina - Love "YA all the way" !;) I agree with Lydia, I think these would be pretty relevant for YA too. I started with women's fiction, and then the YA one popped in my head. I'm thinking that doing both actually helped me with the YA MC's point of view!
ReplyDeleteLinda - You made me laugh. A book with a grandma who can still curl grandpa's toes would be a wonderful read!
Martina - Okay now I'm going to head over to Borders and search for Jennifer Crusie!
Sierra - Lydia made a great point about Miranda Priestly in THE DEVIL WEARS PRADA. Loved that character.
Claire - I'll bet those characters are super fun to write about!
April - Thanks for the reminder about Nano. I'm still trying to decide if I should do it!
Lydia - Thanks to you too, for inviting me over here to The Sharp Angle! =)
Oh dear... is it really NaNo time again? *sigh*
ReplyDeleteThanks again, Jessica! You are welcome back anytime. :)
There is a large community of BBW writers out there who do a lot of good work (I think I'd have to quote my good friend Judy Bagshaw among them) and the remit there is always strong roles for the larger woman. The trouble is that mainstream publishers don't like them as much. So I would say that it is not so much a case of 'not enough writers writing them' as 'not enough publishers accepting them'.
ReplyDeleteSo, I would love to see more larger women in fiction too.