It's Saturday, and I'm sure we're all busy, so let's get right to the point. These were all well-written, cringe-worthy, and each had their own touch of humor, but only one person can win. That person is...
Dot's entry had me laughing and involuntarily saying, "oh!" "ah!" "eegghh!" through the whole thing. It reads like a comedy of errors. And this line pretty much sealed it for me:
She heard the snick of the release, but the shaft is stuck (something I hope I never hear again in ANY context), so she braces herself and starts tugging on it.
Yeah. That pretty much sealed it for me.
Congratulations, Dot!
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Have a great weekend everyone!
~Lydia
Hahaha! That sounds like it would have been part of a total cringe-worthy story. Congrats, Dot!
ReplyDeleteLoved this contest. I gave you a well deserved shot out on my blog for Monday (today) ... and decided to publish the piece I sent to you.
ReplyDeleteAlways fun to stop here :)